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Star: Baby Shower

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Hey, everyone, Jayse here! :)

Alright, so the Baby shower went perfectly, minus the fact that I nearly freaked out after what Lucky told Star and I...I literally thought he said it was either a catastrophic planet-wide explosion...or a freaking miracle, but thanks to my mother's spirit she set the score straight. What struck me odd is that Story and Eli were waiting for me by the temple's entrance. It was pretty nice to see everyone, including Artanis, have a good time. All in all, I never thought I'd see Lucky freak out a little after Luna gave a kick...eh. :shrug: Anyway, it was a pretty crazy day, seeing Reshira having a little fun, as Zeke tried to keep what he said in line. I was able to take a snapshot of Star, as the sun laid high above, having her hand on the baby bump. Just from what I saw in her expression, I'm guessing she can't wait to hold our little girl in her arms for the first time.

*yawn* Good chaos, the clock reads 11:20PM...and what makes this even more weird is that I'm a Cyber-Wolf...alright, so I'll wrap it up for now...maybe I'll try to take a pic when Luna's born into the world...maybe. ^^; Anyway, see you all later!


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Alright...^^; I'm surprised this took all day...ah well...I'm glad I took the time to even do this. please lemme know what you think, since I really poured my heart into this.
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Bahhh ;A; I'm gonna leave another one of these, cuz I can <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/>

I really like the shading on star ^^. Its really good, from what I see all of the spots that should have shading or highlights on her do.

The shadow behind her is a nice touch as well, I really like it c:

Her expression as well, it gives that caring/excited for the baby feeling, well to me anyway.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red"/>

Back to the shading, I think the couch could use a bit more shading to it, looks a little too bland. Same goes for the wall.

Also, star's a cat right? I think the ears are a tad bit too big on her, so I would just shrink them up a bit c:. Then you should be good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>.

You're definitely improving, seeing I'm the one who always see your sketches XD, I would be the one to know lol.

So yeah, happy drawing ^^.